Contents Page Feedback

After posting my Contents Page on Instagram I gained some feedback. Below is what was said.

 

Here is what Jenna said about my Contents Page.

 

 

 

Here is what Charlie also said about my Contents Page.

 

 

 

I have learnt a lot from this feedback on my Contents Page. I have found that most of the conventions on my page are correct and clear. The only thing that seems to be a problem is the colour of some of my writing in burgundy. If I had the chance to remake my magazine again I would change the colour of the writing so that it is easier to read.